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Lone Candle, Book 2, Page 23

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Aries had no idea what she had done.

No supernatural means were employed.

Her will was simply greater than Richard's ability to hold the rope one-handedly.

To push oneself beyond the body's ability takes focus...

And Aries' mind is sharpened like wild flint.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This page was jarring to me. Richard switched sides from the last page and that threw me off. The lens flare on the first panel makes me a little confused about what angle we're looking at for her hands. And I have to say Richard's hands look like they shift in size too dramatically. I can understand trying to use foreshortening but the third and fourth panel keep him in the same scale, so his hands look like they are changing size and that does not help the page.

On a lighter note, the use of expressions is great for conveying the main point of this page and I am still enjoying the show/ don't tell method of comic style they are using. I know this isn't easy but consistency is important.