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Lone Candle page 31 by Zucca-Xerfantes Lone Candle page 31 by Zucca-Xerfantes
Aries wakes up in the basement of the Erton Home...

Her head is foggy, her perceptions a tad blurred, but Billy Erton is unmistakable.

Bet you all thought the 'purple hat' the bartender and ogre mentioned was something Gandalfy and pointy, right? Psssh! This is Lone Candle! He has a baseball style cap from Ashegar University!

And... Aries might be REALLY screwed...

Oh, and we have our first Spiran racial slur! Non-human species, such as the Rathi (Aries species), Grassmen, Skyborn and so on have a racial slur for humans.

Chimp!

Humans call Rathi 'furball' or 'scale-belly'. Grassmen are called 'Greentop' or 'Dirt-eater'. Sub-Terrestrials are called 'Paleskins'. Skyborn are called all manner of things. and Tengu are often called 'Featherhead' or 'Birdbrain'.
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The use of light and shadows on this page was the first thing to capture my interest. The beams of sunlight and even the use of cardboard boxes help project the stuffy and seemingly normal atmosphere of a suburban basement. The reveal of the main antagonist was also handled nicely although it did read a tad cliche with the overhanded attitude. Still, seeing the main character tied up and defiant helps show off that wild side that most fans expected when the ogres from earlier first started yelling at her. This was well made but the villian posturing removed some of the tension to me.
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ultraman400 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Student Artist
Aries is that good a merc isn't she.
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Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aye.

I'm glad you're enjoying the comic!
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axelfirekirby Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i knew it!
bill gates is evil!
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Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well he *was* a big Obama donor, so...
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axelfirekirby Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ha ha im neutral so i dont care..
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Mars-Walker Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omigod, I was thinking EXACTLY what GreOfPTA said.
Just a more stunted version of that man.
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Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's the baseball cap and glasses. Heh heh.

But yeah, he's gonna get his rear handed to him.

Then maybe Aries will break the 4th Wall and kick Moore's ass in person.

I can dream...
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Mars-Walker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually you should, just for fun!
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:iconzucca-xerfantes:
Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I should, shouldn't I...?
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Mars-Walker Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"You're fighting for oil companies Aries!"
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:iconzucca-xerfantes:
Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Lords on the mountain! A manatee in a baseball cap!"
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GreyOfPTA Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Filmographer
I'm getting a thin Michael Moore vibe from this guy.
Kick his a$$ Aries!
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Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, yeah... She's not gonna let him get away to do 'Bowling for Galomas'...
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cutemute34 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nicely done; I especially love all the subversion of expectations regarding his hat. :)
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reddragon162 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
If this was a porn, right about now would be when he would whip out his prick and say something like "I'll tell you where I'm about to hide this big boy..." and she would pretend to not enjoy it.
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Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...

I think you're reading the wrong comic, bud...
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Iron-Confederate Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This week on the Cinema Snob, the Snob documents a rash of porno spoofs based off of indy webcomics when porn directors ran out of ideas!
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Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh dear O_O;;
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Iron-Confederate Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Admit it, if it weren't for the Snob's cut-off date, he would totally do it.
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boykingkilla Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Yikes, hope she gets safe. might not, but either way...

Excellently done!
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Mbk606 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The mountains of books... the love of blazers... the blue jeans and belt... the floppy hair... the glasses... the fem-boyish figure... the snarky disposition... the living in his parent's house while he's well into his 20's...

My God... it's AU me!!
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Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*Pulls out spy camera*

Maybe I went overboard... >_>
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Mbk606 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
All coincidence, I'm certain.
Something tells me he's gonna die a terrible death, though.... 8B

“I've got my eyes on you. One's eye's on them, one's eye's on you.”
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Lord-Godzilla Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
That's good old family fashioned racism...
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Zucca-Xerfantes Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No no no! No way... I mean... Aries has lots of human friends!

Heh, no really, she does. But she's so pissed off and outraged right now that it just slipped...
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