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Lone Candle, Page 3, Book 2

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Indeed, as many students can attest, loans can be a pain in the keister.

Liz wants them to be successful in their venture, but they're afraid they'll need to abandon credibility in exchange for appeal.

The old lady of course, won't disappoint...

[Artwork by my friend, the amazing, the indomitable, the one and only, :iconegardn4:!]
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Focusing on the art itself and ignoring the dialogue, I think the wide third panel is a great study of embarrassed expressions and shows off the characters details in a pleasing fashion. As for the dialogue, I had to re read it a few times to get the meaning. I admit it felt a bit unnatural reading the dialogue out loud to myself and it makes me wonder if these characters speak like this all the time. Without knowing their back stories I can't really say. T back and forth dialogue lowered the impact for me but the art and timing are still top notch.